S1 E112: Imperial Knights - 5

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  1. MarqFJA8724/3/21 02:47

    "The worlds knights ruled adopted the feudal system"

    That's an awkward-sounding choice of phrasing. I suggest adding "that" between "worlds" and "knights".

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    1. DongGoolTroll24/3/21 20:07

      I did, thank you!

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    2. MarqFJA8725/3/21 02:23

      You're welcome. I've actually been hesitant to point out the rather numerous spelling and grammar errors that I've been seeing in these comics, because I didn't want you to feel like you're doing a terrible job at translating them.

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    3. DongGoolTroll25/3/21 02:59

      Np. Please help me making this little series better!

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